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I'm supposed to choose "good" or "good" or "bad" or wrong "to go with these sentences in the paragraph, these are what I picked up, please check them:) Wynona jewelry was not selling well in the right artists. Poor lighting in the window makes it difficult to see fine details of all jewelry. She was not making any money because sales were doing so badly. Her friend Tasha rewired the lights, and jewelry began to shine. "It looks good!" Wynona said. But he felt bad about not having money to pay Tasha. Within a few days, business was good. Wynona rings, necklaces and bracelets are selling well. Wynona did so well he was able to pay for their work Tasha. Thanks to Tasha, everything went well and Wynona sales were as good as expected.

It's pretty good, but in the last sentence should be "as good as expected." Remember that good and evil are both, while adverbs are good and evil adjectives.

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